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ferret i'm putting all the things that i'm going to put to music here 030824
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ferret *~*~*~*razormouth*~*~*~*

three words like three swords race through the air
as i'm lying here in this pit of despair
and as they fly they cut without a single care
there's nowhere left to run 'cause i'm already there

there's no reason to run
there's no need to fight
as you fly through the dark
on this lonely night
a shy eye turned aside
and a paperclip bent
and I would go back but
my life’s already spent

a dark misshapen head seen through the corner of the eye
as I seek to tear them down but still in me they have a spy
and I know that I can heal as I spread my wings to fly
but if only you could have been there on the night that I died

you left me here
all alone
so dark and cold
in my own home
if only you had stayed
just one more day
and now my debt is payed
I’m leaving in may
I’ll find you here
Sitting in that chair
The same one that
I messed with your hair
In

I’ll miss you too
You know it was great
Even if it’s
just for a while
I’ll purge
from my heart all hate
for you
of you
I love
You
030824
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ferret ***~~~*~*~let the water rise~*~*~~~***



What is my place in all this world of hate?
How can you stand to see me every day?
So empty and jaded,
So castrated,

You looked me in the eyes
But I turned away!
Why have you stood by me
To this day?
Why are you leaving now?
It must be something I did somehow
Why do I need all of this pain?

Let the water rise
Let the water rise so high
Above your head
And you’ll be flyin’ high
Up above the world with all of them

Look down upon the people of the earth
Look how they laugh and smile with mirth
They all have fun
But one by one (they die)
There must be something more than this!

You looked me in the eyes
But I turned away!
Why have you stood by me
To this day?
Why are you leaving now?
It must be something I did somehow
Why do I need all of this pain?

Let the water rise
Let the water rise so high
Above your head
And you’ll be flyin’ high
Up above the world with all of them
Let the water rise
Let the water rise
Let the water rise
Let the water RISE
030824
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ferret *~*~**~~~**~forest~**~~~**~*~*

take a walk in my dark forest
bring your candle to light the way
share with me your deepest secrets
before you leave you'll have to pay
pay the clown at the entrance
the one who took your ticket
take a quarter from your pocket
you know where to stick it
burn my trees and kill my creatures
just to keep your facial features
before i take them all away
or else you just might have to stay
if you can't get out
then why come in?
if you don't want to shout
then why make me scream?
as light reaches top
my leaves turned upset
and rot shown black
beneath the sunset
and wet with rain
the winter dew
i crush the brain
beneath my shoe
and bury me along with you
030824
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ferret **~*~*~~*~ I ~*~~*~*~**


I
take off this mask
reaveal the truth
and i will ask
why the average youth
in America
is so fucked up
it doesn't make any sense to me
anymore

no, no
not anymore

so take this knife
cut through the bone
and take your life
So you don't
have to come home
to an empty box

nothing inside to love

take off this mask (encrusted in)
reaveal the truth (in my own tears)
and i will ask (Why must i live)
why the average youth (through these long years)
in America (The state of freedom)
is so fucked up (It is no more)
it doesn't make any sense to me
anymore
030921
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karl the weed ahhhg... must... edit.... dude make those rhymes sound less forced, please.

"pay the clown at the entrance
the one who took your ticket
take a quarter from your pocket
you know where to stick it
burn my trees and kill my creatures
just to keep your facial features" (??)

keep the rhythm consistent, that was
x
a
x
a
b
b

make it
a
a
b
b
or
x
a
x
a
x
b
x
b


also wheres the edited version of razormouth, put that up.

just construtive criticism.
030922
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ferret here's something new for all of you reader-ish people out there


Lately I’ve been slipping
Lately I’ve been tripping
Lately I’ve been walking painfully
On all this broken glass
Lately I’ve been slipping
Lately I’ve been tripping
Lately I’ve been walking painfully
ON ALL THIS BROKEN GLASS

I know you can hear me and
I know you can feel me and
I know that you know me and
I need you to help me and
I need you now
I need you now
I need you now
I need you now and
(shh)

Creeping silently past the
Darkness, we’ve said the last of
Our goodbyes
But now we stand face to face
With all of our past mistakes
Now it’s time
Now it’s time to fly!

I know you can hear me and
I know you can feel me and
I know that you know me and
I need you to help me and
I need you now
I need you now
I need you now
I need you now and
SILENCE!

We must not let the darkness
Claim us run from the harness
Of this pain
Propaganda has blown this
Into these false proportions
Now it’s time
No it’s time to fly!

And I can’t
Keep going on like this
I can’t
Keep going on like this
I can’t!
Keep going on like this!
I can’t!
Keep going on!
No!

This has to stop!
And has to stop now!
No!
This has to stop!
So I’ll stop it now!


I know you can hear me and
I know you can feel me and
I know that you know me and
I need you to help me and
I need you now
I need you now
I need you now
I need you now and
SILENCE!
031005
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ferret i'm thinking of calling it "silence", how's that sound? 031005
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karl the weed i like. keep writing it gets better each time. 031005
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