i_wanna_feel_you_breathe_me by endless desire Because I couldn't help myself. I really liked this poem. Here you go, desire. I hope you don't mind. ((your soupish blatherskite)) she breathes in, calm. deep. filling. though, she never needs to breathe out. i doubt her lungs know how to anymore. that's where he comes in, you see. as she sits, holding the air in her collapsing chest. lungs heavy and weak. slowly he breaths in, pulling the air straight from her lungs so she may continuing living, thriving, ever so slowly. smiling at the world, feeling she has made some sort of progress in her life. but they just turn their heads, and look the other way. in she sinks, hiding within herself. are you alone, girl? she breathes in, so exasperated crushed_by_life. why does she bother? the air remains in her lungs panic consumes ((cacophony)). breathe out, she screams to her body. but she is lost in fear until the boy saves her once again. pulling her with his breath, lifting her spirits to soar. she sits alone in the dark room on her bed with the sheets turn up and sneaking over onto the mattress, scratching like chalkboard screeches. she must tuck them down.ohgod. but the energy to do so escapes her. don't speak. it will just be a waste of words. she is a waste of words she is a waste of life. nonono. don't say that. please don't say that. she rises from her spot on her bed, but in defeat sinks down, back against the wall, curling into a small lump on her cluttered floor. a nail scraps her back but she ignores it. i want to feel you breathe me. calm. deep. filling. oh, one more. complete. and then soco sings, And dreams came around you in a hazy rain You opened your mouth wide to feel them fall. trickle down. tickle your tongue. can you feel me fall? 030706 ... karl the weed when i know its you who writes these things, it scares me slightly 030706 ... oldephebe mute with awe 030706 ... soup for the poor But I am too afraid that you will breathe me in and spit me out in some disgust. Out will come the "I love you's", Out will come the words you say when you are really thinking of a boat on the marina or a job you may day have. But you convince me, all the same with something sweet inside you. Glowing and charming. Next I know, all I can do is wish you would care. Some days I think you do care and I am just too blind to see or want to assume the worst of everyone. 030706 ... endless desire so i feel slightly embarrassed that someone felt the spelling mistake was so bad that it needed a new page. . .but i guess it was. ((i_wanna_feel_you_breath_me)) but i guess it was pretty bad. but i am really not sure what you mean karl or phebe? i feel slightly confused, first because someone made a new one and then because. . .oh, i don't know. the thick summer air is starting to make me dizzy. apologizes for her many mistakes. 030706 ... oldephebe endlessdesire - your writing has a prehensile, palpable quality - serrated shades of what you said unwind in me - keep writing - its good stuff 030706 ... endless desire smiles wildly and feels inspired. 030706 what's it to you? who go blather from