you_failed_me
empress reflecting 031219
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Nukemall sorry, but i only had f's left in the handout bag.

better luck next time.
031219
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misstree "i have failed you, my queen.
i walked into the wildest wood
and left, never facing the beast..."

will find the rest of that poem later. good one.
031219
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werewolf please find it. 031219
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pipedream seconds the motion 031219
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brain stew so many things i
needed i pinned on you you
couldnt see you break
me i die a little every
time you walk away
031219
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misstree found it The Quest ... 010705

I have failed you, my Queen.

I have assaulted the walls of the tower
and come away with pebbles, dust.

I have ventured into the darkest wood
and left, never facing the beast.

I have held all the world's diamonds
and let them slip through my fingers, forgotten,
instead of forging a glittering path
for your ascension to live among stars and gods.

And when cold winds make my bones ache
as I sit by a fitful fire in a quiet cottage
in a wood without wilderness,
I will remember
that I have failed you, my dearest Queen.
031223
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unhinged and i failed you
raping_the_void
left between us
inside of us
it's over
the hapless dream of youth
when i knew you then
and just seeing you
made me smile
because we've died together
one too many times now
seen the emptiness
too deep
in each other's eyes
you were supposed to stop me
from falling
i was supposed to pick you up
off your knees
you failed me
and i failed you
i am waiting for one last sign
because it's supposed to be over now
but my heart just won't let it die
i think you are the last one
i will ever love like this
the last one
i'll ever hold onto til the bitter end
the end staring right at us
a tear falls
serenely
who would have ever thought
it would have led us here
031223
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pipedream yay misstree!
*holds up tree's arm and yells 'we have a winnaaah!*

wow unhinged..that was raw, and honest, moving.
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RoXXXie wow, that was indeed beautiful 040110
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unhinged thanks guys

but it really feels weird accepting appreciation for expounded on your own pain. ya know what i mean?
040110
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girl_jane I'm sorry... 040221
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pipedream most honest-to-goodness, *real* writing is expounding on one emotion or the other, so i guess its all right...vehicle for coping and all that. 040221
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jimmy every story i'm in must end the same. personality, is it destiny? 040224
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pipers no...its being stuck in a rut i think. 040224
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jimmy yeah yeah yeah, i'll stick you in my rut 040225
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blah-ze i only wish i hadn't failed me second 040225
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