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empress
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reflecting
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Nukemall
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sorry, but i only had f's left in the handout bag. better luck next time.
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misstree
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"i have failed you, my queen. i walked into the wildest wood and left, never facing the beast..." will find the rest of that poem later. good one.
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werewolf
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please find it.
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pipedream
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seconds the motion
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brain stew
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so many things i needed i pinned on you you couldnt see you break me i die a little every time you walk away
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misstree found it
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The Quest ... 010705 I have failed you, my Queen. I have assaulted the walls of the tower and come away with pebbles, dust. I have ventured into the darkest wood and left, never facing the beast. I have held all the world's diamonds and let them slip through my fingers, forgotten, instead of forging a glittering path for your ascension to live among stars and gods. And when cold winds make my bones ache as I sit by a fitful fire in a quiet cottage in a wood without wilderness, I will remember that I have failed you, my dearest Queen.
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unhinged
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and i failed you raping_the_void left between us inside of us it's over the hapless dream of youth when i knew you then and just seeing you made me smile because we've died together one too many times now seen the emptiness too deep in each other's eyes you were supposed to stop me from falling i was supposed to pick you up off your knees you failed me and i failed you i am waiting for one last sign because it's supposed to be over now but my heart just won't let it die i think you are the last one i will ever love like this the last one i'll ever hold onto til the bitter end the end staring right at us a tear falls serenely who would have ever thought it would have led us here
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pipedream
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yay misstree! *holds up tree's arm and yells 'we have a winnaaah!* wow unhinged..that was raw, and honest, moving.
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RoXXXie
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wow, that was indeed beautiful
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unhinged
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thanks guys but it really feels weird accepting appreciation for expounded on your own pain. ya know what i mean?
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girl_jane
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I'm sorry...
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pipedream
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most honest-to-goodness, *real* writing is expounding on one emotion or the other, so i guess its all right...vehicle for coping and all that.
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jimmy
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every story i'm in must end the same. personality, is it destiny?
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pipers
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no...its being stuck in a rut i think.
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040224
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jimmy
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yeah yeah yeah, i'll stick you in my rut
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blah-ze
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i only wish i hadn't failed me second
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040225
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what's it to you?
who
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blather
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