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ClairE
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They hit the air, they freeze. Once the words lie on the page you can't crack them open. Stubborn acorn, homemade maple candy. They beguile us with temptation of an answer.
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pipedream
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i can't think of anything interesting or intelligent or pretty enough to put here, so i'll just kind of bask in in wonder of this page if y'don't mind :)
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Doar
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so carefully shorn of depth and meaning,
these glittering dead breaths,
being smashed by careless pedestrians.
Wait for spring, if it should return,
scattered and held without.
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pvcpillow
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vunderful. vell done.
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Doar
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vell then, i vill take a vow!
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hehe
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oh you meant zat vor ClairE
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nom
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moths flying like sight from eyes
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whitechocolatewalrus
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used in expansive nights
cold air
a gust of dark
i see the eye
sparkles
twinges in my arm
clouds overhead
the fogg sitting so still
breathe the air
the still night
fingers cold
toes cold
heart cold
glittering dead breaths.
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nom
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really liked that walrus, very colourful and chilly
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pipedream
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i meant zat for yoo, death :)
vunderful, valrus...zat vas vairy vairy goot..i lauves ze fog meself. ze breath it not glitter in ze fog, it ony join the many many miniature vaters in ze air to become vun vith nature, ya? and maybe be breathed in by someone else and zus jhoo vill become part of zis someone and both not even know.
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oldephebe
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oldephebe casually walks by..looks askance..a wry smile plays across his bespectacled face..stops for a moment..and then walks on..Heralticus only had it half right..one thread gives birth..becomes the mother of muse and innovative permutations..good stuff..
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oE
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that's Heraclitus..
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stalked
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unhinged
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pale_beautiful
it always felt more at home
in the cold
have_you_ever_died
to feel frozen
all the way through
exhaling smoke turned to breath
lungs collapse
in the exhausted chilled effort
it was more self_complete somehow
as the rest of the smokers
pass out face down in the snow
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oldephebe
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perfect beauty unhinged..
if you get the time please us with more of your agonizing exaltations of spirit
i'm being totally non-ironic..really..
but i know you're extremely busy with your graduate studies..so i guess i'll take these islands of brief but equisite exhalations..
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oE
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actually, here are my belated props to claire, pd, doar, wcw, and nom..*clasps heart in an authentically effette gesture of overt emotionalism*
beautiful breaths guys..like angels finger painting..writing on a mirror sheathed in mist..
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pipedream
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angels finger painting....*blinks ecstatically*
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what's it to you?
who
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blather
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