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Cheap Vodka and Toxic Kisses
are leading me to bed
to tease and joke and spin a line
of barbed wire daisies round my head.
Cheap Vodka and Toxic Kisses
will listen to my stories
of wasted opportunities
and great unpublished glories.
Cheap Vodka and Toxic Kisses
will wait until I fall asleep
then tuck me in and disappear
to nurse some other creep.
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sabbie
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thats beautiful.
i dream of the_dream_girls, and theyre different every time
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Toxic_Kisses
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Obviously this needs to be addressed, but I'm not quite what to say first.
Should I say that I'm honored to be in this poem (BC I most certainly am) or should I first say that I'm pretty sure who ever wrote this isn’t a creep and that "spin a line
Of barbed wire daisies round my head" sounds more like I'm simply telling you lies you want to hear
For example:
You "Do I look good wearing this green plastic garbage bag?"
Me "Why yes you look absolutely amazing, I truly admire your original since of style"
witch I would hope by now that you knew I don't lie to anyone about anything to spare ones feelings, if I think you wearing a green trash bag is a horrible idea I'll say az much.
So, while I enjoy being in your poem and find it quite creative (That’s a good thing mind you) I also think that it's portrayed me wrongly, I mean while I'll always be here to support and listen and encourage you though what ever life thoughts your way (That’s what friends are for right?) I won't ever lie to you.
Oh yea, and one more thing, I think I made far too big a deal over this.
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DannyH
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I think I meant the daisies for beauty and the barbed wire for honesty. Your interpretation is for you to choose, of course
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DannyH
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Oh bollocks. I always blow my own cover.
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CheapVodka
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*thinkz*
wow...i'm flattered? or was it really about us? was it just two names that happened to be well placed...etc?
i dunno...but if it was for us then thank ya'z
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DannyH
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For me, about an imaginary you.
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ABC 123
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STAMPED FOR YOUR APPROVAL
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050504
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what's it to you?
who
go
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blather
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