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misstree
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it's almost comical, this desperate doggie paddle, while hungry water draws insistently at ankles. at least, it *was* desperate, before eyes glazed over and muscle's heat turned to dead ache. i'm swimming because it seems like the proper thing to do in such a circumstance; not that it makes a difference, but that it's proper, even if the outcome is set. the water yanks on my legs like an impatient lover, and i watch it with flat eyes and wonder how much longer i'll weakly wave away its advance. can't be long, now.
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mt
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it suckles the energy right out of your toes
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REAListic optimIST
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if you wanted your toes sucked, all you had to do was ask. no need to go off the meds for that... ;p
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lovekilledlove
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there was nothing i could see but i felt it, i felt you slipping away from me. you know it's ironic, that every time people denote a specific trait/virtue/fault about themselves - the opposite is true.
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unhinged
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in_the_wake_of_lamentable_tides i learned for myself what my brother learned in the ocean just let_go and if you get sucked under eventually you'll get spit back out
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In_Bloom
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Unhinged, you and your brother are so right and it's the same for lies... you might get sucked down but evenutally you'll be spit back up, free and clear. Not to say the ride isn't a rush.
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090626
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what's it to you?
who
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blather
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