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dawn_and_dusk
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neesh
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purple pinking sky, clouds cascade colours alight, soon the sun ignites. orange purple dusk, horizon weighs heavily, sinking into night.
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zeke
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blue black behind tree pale yellow numbus emerge tree gives light to sky mist on fire at sky orange ball melting in bowl treetops burn near dark
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Doar
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orange redness of clouds burning aqua plunging inception lifting voices in harmony black felt of home letting appeals die in blue caresses
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ever dumbening
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tight high-pitched insect buzz of brain locked in skull country highway slowly warms tires skin and steel dew shine steam lifts from fields and roofs gnats and moths live and die, air filling muscles reach the end of their stretch and await repair low hum pace-matching vibration slows turns down turns off
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akuma aoi
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the world cast in shades of blue and then again in deepening shades of red sinking back into the nearly black violet of night
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pete
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asleep or at work
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- the first entries are haiku couplets -
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Doar
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somehow I think the others that posted here knew that but decided to take their own directions with the theme. (just mho) .
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neesh
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yeah, i wasn't playing some kind of dawn/dusk haiku couplet game, i just happen to have recently written haikus at dawn and dusk.
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z
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i like this page
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pete
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i didn't read the first blathes on first visit, i just wrote what the title told me too
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Doar
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light and dark facing, a blue expanse, a chirping I hear the song ends. .
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080506
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when darkness falls
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i think about her, and smile, then drift off in thoughts; sweet dreams by the clouds.
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080507
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what's it to you?
who
go
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blather
from
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