aboutyou starjewel Metallic gray skies Rain like melted ice And You It’s the rainy days The somber and dark days, That make me think of you It’s always the rain’s steady rhythm That forces my thoughts on paper And they’re always About you Roaring, licking, dancing Fire Steamy, melting, lovely Warmth Strong, gentle, sculptured Hands And you Lonely, cold, empty House Crisp, white, blank Paper Lost, rapid, uncontrollable Pen And Me It’s the rainy days The somber and dark days, That make me think of you It’s always the rain’s steady rhythm That forces my thoughts on paper And they’re always About you Rich, fake, beautiful Girls Flashing, deafening, intruding Cameras Playing, smiling, partying You And Them Stabbing, Piercing, Deepening Pain Unfathomable, impossible, ever growing Distance Intangible, inevitable, ridiculous Dreams And Us It’s the rainy days, The somber and dark days That make me think of you It’s always the rain’s steady rhythm That forces my thoughts on paper And they’re always About you 031124 ... starjewl Hey you guys think that that could make a cool song? You're comments would be much appreciated =Þ Thanks 031124 ... endless desire it seems really good. i really like the last stanza. but it's hard to judge a song with out hearing it. it's like trying to judge a play without seeing it. . .it can be done, but you never get the full jist of it. well, not quite but you see what i mean. 031124 ... starjewel the thing is, all I have is the lyrics, so it's not really a song yet but I'm supposed to submit the lyircs to a contest and then if it wins I guess aomeone else writes the music, nut thanks for your input endless desire! 031125 what's it to you? who go blather from