a_final_piece_of_bad_advice
daf a final piece of bad advice
to be overlooked and torn apart
by the intellectual masses
to be set aside in favor of
some meaningless idle chatter
a final word born out of love
a final say in present grief
for future pain
hope of relief
one final thought remains

look to your ways
look to your needs
turn back from your dependence
learn of the world
not man and steel
but rather self reliance

learn if you will
of chicory
of dandelions
and stick on stick
learn if you can
to make your own
for soon you'll depend on you

a final thought to ease your mind
and though you'll leave these words behind
a final care
deemed out of touch
could save you
sufering
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Lemon_Soda I know someone who will automatically take anything I say the worst possible way.


Have you ever been wrong nomatter what all the time to someone? Where any advice is bad advice?

By the way, that was beautiful Daf.
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