amiss
. The suggestions helped not,
they were formed hastily,
formed for some other entity,
formed to fit all and therefore fit none

So I ran
from the suggestions,
from good-intentioned bad advisings,
I ran with my legs,
I raced with my thoughts,
but I felt so despairing
that I ran at the mouth
someone heard the nouns
yet missed the verbs.

There is no point in this
chitter-chat counsely-wounseling,
you do not get it,
I can't explain it,
truth is intangible and
lost in abstraction....
071105
...
somebody feeling amiss
is no feeling of bliss
081028
...
somebody good poem, btw dot 081028
what's it to you?
who go
blather
from