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it's time for your very best haiku.
insolent slugs walk
while you grind your heels in
and the grit cuts deep
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shit...
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insolent slugs walk
while you grind your heels in grain
and the grit cuts deep
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mon uow
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reps
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lotus blooms eaten
shines the sun heart beating slow
water sings with light
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sails open for now
more pushed than flying they go
monarchs steer by sun
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karasu
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( pictures_of_the_floating_world )
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epitome of incomprehensibility
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One of my bug_reports turned into one. Was edited into further briefness.
I like the approach to haiku taken by a poet who's also the father of one of my childhood friends.
1) turn a memorable moment into a haiku
2) keep it three lines but don't worry about the traditional syllable count
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Jus
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*Fatty*
the doughy parts are
veiled by waves of loose fabric
death by elastic
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Mental Health Witchery: An Haiku
It was yesterday
that I cried most of the day
This shadow work sucks
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raze
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all the world is white
and i am still half_asleep
in its glacial arms
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(I'm sure I could find a few which I've written and could share creatively and unironically. But with that being said I -must- share with you my favorite of all time. IYKYK)
Sad, strange little man
This isn't flying, this is
Falling with style
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what's it to you?
who
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blather
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