chorus raze so i sang a sickly sweet refrain, and your face was granite licked by rain. your expression didn't change. it was never going to change. but i thought repetition, given enough care, might alter the immutable. so i made a mop of my microfiber hair and sang it again, trying to catch up with the echo my voice made in the nothing all around. 131116 ... raze and in catching my echo, i didn't make a sound. 131116 ... epitome of incomprehensibility Recording things on the old tape player for fun until it stopped being fun because I wanted to get things right and I woke up in the middle of the night with the chorus in my head. But I like going from a D flat 7th chord to a B flat major chord (the second is the main key of the piece) with the pivot tone being F. So I guess it wasn't altogether a waste of time. Changes are saved sometimes. 131117 ... e_o_i In G it's easier. And then I can hit the high note at the end. "Refrain" I like because it means both stopping and repetition. A nice little paradox of a word. 131213 what's it to you? who go blather from