editing Cicero clips of kimonos and some without the wearer-not the wearer of my soul soft skin in comfort(er) sliding silkily across my skin igniting my blood sideways and upways until I'm a raging inferno of passion aching to disappear the other eyes who hinder my hands in their goal. bear skin is her best color - the bed her best shirt. for in both she is angelic, perfect and heavenly like the stars illuminating her perfect chin. 030116 ... Isaou Oh dear. Now what am I supposed to do with my life? Editing, you were so much fun today. 090726 ... epitome of incomprehensibility Right now it's mostly adding or subtracting commas. Proofreading for good writers is no fun; there are no "sea enemas." 150807 ... e_o_i Editing my own work for consistency involves odd "corrections" when it's a kid's voice I'm writing in. Specificially, this kid's voice. And the specific correction is changing "mosque" to "Muslim church." 220402 ... e_o_i this kid's = Carol Winter's, she with the dreaded essay 220402 ... e_o_i Doing this with a tired mind gets me sentences like "My fingers were getting angry" and "she was born when she was forty-two." 220409 what's it to you? who go blather from