union_and_divide
raze there's a man sitting in a chair.
i'm gonna tell him he's not me.

his mention of a lone star
makes serious sense.

i don't admire the hard
part of this geometry —
to see him struggle
against his former self.

"why are you here with me?" he asks,
and i tell him that he can drive on.

though i was tempted a time
or two to ask him if i had
a bruise in a glass,
he has to keep the house.
and the blades of the new
future are the coastal colour.

dream him as he is,
not as he used to be.
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epitome of incomprehensibility Off the green_line. I was at Union Street today when I realized I had to head in a different direction. I arrived at my destination too late for poetry, so I'm happy to read yours now. 250426
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e_o_i (also, this might be put together from at-first unrelated thoughts, but "blades of the coastal future" gave me an image of wind turbines and then the smell of the sea) 250426
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e_o_i edits (I quoted it wrong, sorry) 250426
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raze hey, i like "blades of the coastal future"!

(and your hunch was rightthis is a bit of ye_olde half_asleep_poetry.)
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