listen_to_what_you_see lostgirl crunch, crunch crunch down the narrow path battling emotions,  and lurking tears listen to what you see the five_inch_thick layer of sun dried leaves says 'go on--step all over me i'm here for you.' the sun says 'goodnight' on its way to bed 'i fall to bring you darkness so you can rest.' everyone and everything falls 101029 ... auburn I read it as 'fail' instead of fall. I'm still trying to decide which version I like best. 101029 what's it to you? who go blather from