voiceover
raze so this is my first film
review of the new_year,
laying down both dialogue
and description.

it doesn't tend to come
bleeding out of the eyes
of the actress or anything.

the original has so many holes
and discursive elements,
it demands an act of contrition.

a narration:
her sideways
glances in
voiceover.

such archness
and aberration.

what i don't hear:
the violence of small toys
and how she chose to end it.

it's a reminder
not that everything's awful,
but that not everything
gets out alive.
250713
what's it to you?
who go
blather
from