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neesh purple pinking sky,
clouds cascade colours alight,
soon the sun ignites.

orange purple dusk,
horizon weighs heavily,
sinking into night.
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zeke blue black behind tree
pale yellow numbus emerge
tree gives light to sky

mist on fire at sky
orange ball melting in bowl
treetops burn near dark
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Doar orange redness of clouds burning
aqua plunging inception
lifting voices in harmony

black felt of home
letting appeals die
in blue caresses
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ever dumbening tight high-pitched insect buzz of brain locked in skull
country highway slowly warms tires skin and steel
dew shine steam lifts from fields and roofs

gnats and moths live and die, air filling
muscles reach the end of their stretch and await repair
low hum pace-matching vibration slows turns down turns off
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akuma aoi the world cast in shades of blue and then again in deepening shades of red sinking back into the nearly black violet of night 050808
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pete asleep or at work 050808
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- - the first entries are haiku couplets - 050809
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Doar somehow I think the others that posted here knew that but decided to take their own directions with the theme.

(just mho)

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neesh yeah, i wasn't playing some kind of dawn/dusk haiku couplet game, i just happen to have recently written haikus at dawn and dusk. 050809
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z i like this page 050809
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pete i didn't read the first blathes on first visit, i just wrote what the title told me too 050809
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Doar light and dark facing,
a blue expanse, a chirping
I hear the song ends.

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when darkness falls i think about her,
and smile, then drift off in thoughts;
sweet dreams by the clouds.
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