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pete little changes here and there,
taking and adding and translating
from sleepiness-found words
in to a soulful mourning
and promises i never want to keep.

but for the dressing that comes
only after the undressing has begun
(because, prudish, we're dressed from birth
natural and unnatural both are meaningless in the confusion that is fostered)

the easy beats
your heart so far from mine
and mine unwilling to try anymore
nervous for the meeting
another edit here and there

changing words
from mournful noise
to sacred silence,
what's unsaid
what is unsaid
remains unsaid
painfully
unsaid
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what's it to you?
who go
blather
from